tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2244203796398614305.post9157921207713533102..comments2024-02-12T01:32:47.184-07:00Comments on PROW 100: Foundations of Composition: Erin McKean Redefines The Dictionary - Live Blogging as Proofreading Practise: Billie FlemingUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2244203796398614305.post-72606797263267906842009-11-16T15:31:31.454-07:002009-11-16T15:31:31.454-07:00After the word bad in your second sentence there s...After the word bad in your second sentence there should a period. Then omit the next work "a". In your third sentence, after "changed" there should be a period. In your forth sentence, it doesn't really make sense. Maybe something like "Computers speed up the process; they don't change the result." The sentence starting with "Finding" is very hard to understand. "Speeches writing?" <br /><br />I do like your concluding sentence. It wrapped up the point of her speech very well.Shaynahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00893300804015572610noreply@blogger.com