tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2244203796398614305.post2126335667373490175..comments2024-02-12T01:32:47.184-07:00Comments on PROW 100: Foundations of Composition: erin McKean Redefines the Dictionary - Live Blogging as Proofreading Practise: Caleb CaswellUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2244203796398614305.post-63682581280016774442009-11-16T15:35:03.104-07:002009-11-16T15:35:03.104-07:00You did a good job of summarizing all of the infor...You did a good job of summarizing all of the information/ideas contained in the lecture; however, the organization made it a bit difficult to understand. Separating paragraphs here and there wouldn't have gone amiss. It would have been a good idea to actually explain the ham butt metaphor. That being said, I applaud your ability to include all points covered in the lecture in an almost-clear manner. Had I not watched the video, I would still have been able to decipher 99% of what you were talking about.Ramona Korpanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16415939189407681482noreply@blogger.com